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Lovely read

"Absolutely loved reading this story! The way the relationship between Arjun and Anaya developed was so beautifully done. They both had their flaws and reservations, yet chose to overcome them together for each other. I’m not undermining the trauma Anaya faced, but I found Arjun’s devotion to her truly beautiful—his care and consistency helped her heal. And Anaya’s patience and support, helping Arjun finally trust and open up, were just as touching. A fantastic story overall! Please keep writing—I can’t wait to read more of your work! "

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NA story

"Great story"

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Love it

"It is an engaging story of how an elder daugher who is carrying the weight of world over her shoulders is arranged to marry a youngest son of the family. He help her to release the weight she is carrying. Their are women who don't show what they feel and this story describe it well."

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Sridevi

"Really superb "

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Must read

"Interesting love story "

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Great first book

"The characters are strong. The book is an easy, light read. It is delightful to watch the relationship develop. "

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I love this story so far

"The only reason I didn't give 5 stars across is because a couple of the paragraphs are duplicates "

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Some parts are very repetitive

"Repetitive "

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The day decision

"Nice creater"

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