Into the Valley

"I love the story so far! There are very few technical issues I have run across. The pacing is great, and the romantic tension is absolutely perfect. I'm getting really invested in the character backstories and development even though I've played the game through to completion several times over. I haven't come across any tense issues that are typical of beginner novelists. This feels and reads like professional work that really just needs a second eye for editing. Please keep going! "