Inkitt
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Enjoyable story

"The author should review American distances. NY to LA takes many days to drive. Also, review pronouns. Otherwise cool story. "

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Great book loved it

"Great book loved it"

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Great story

"This is the story I've been looking for a long time. A dark, obsessive love of a young man, which is caused by a mental illness. I'm glad that the heroine gave Felix a second chance. Now that he has the right treatment, he deserves love too. The story is captivating from the first chapter, although at first, there are funny moments, which with each chapter reveal the darkness of the main character. I love it with all my heart! Good luck with your next projects! "

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Love is not enough

"The ending was better because I thought poor Felix would never be able to be happy. I’m glad that Lucas finally came around and stopped being so mean because he needed someone to care for him also."

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