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Great read but..

"I want to know who Emily ended up with. I hope it is Michael. Enjoyed the plot line. Thanks!"

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The stripper

"The book was a very entertaining read, no boring part at all, very well written. Hope the author does write a book two."

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"What a whirlwind. I hope she finds her way in the end"

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Amazing characters and storyline

"The story was perfect. The characters were really interesting. Her two personas fabulously described. The twists and turns were really unexpected. The sex scenes wild and hot. The ending is a serious cliffhanger. Brace yourself. 🫣🤩❤️ Overall an amazingly complex and empowering story. 🥰"

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Great Story!❤️‍🔥

"LOVED THIS AND YES——-it needs a second book! Your writing really pulls one into the story leaving you wanting more for sure. Excellent writing! PLEASE write a sequel to this. Well done! Cheers "

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@adrienne213

"I loved this story, its story line, the complexity of the characters and the great detailed suspenseful writing the author provided! I’d love to see who Emily ended up with! Awesome Story!!!"

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Desp... Excited

"The story was like a rollercoaster, but damn it was worth riding! Of course I would love to read the sequel and my guessing that Emily stayed in the certain orbit, why would she not? :) Loved this story, and if you will have the time and the opportunity, would be eager to hear more about those characters. Thank you for the ride;)"

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The Stripper

"A sequel will definately do thank you! Loved this book so much❤️"

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The Stripper

"This was good!. I'd definitely look forward to a sequel. Does Sun finally get the girl(Emily), or does Michael or Patrick (Dr. Carter) worm back into her life? Also, Jessica needs a story, too. "

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Good read recommend

"Love this author. Good writing and strong characters. Definitely would love to see a sequel. Who is honey? Where did Emily, Jessica and Sun end up? Who actually is Sun? More please. "

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More please!

"This was a great book so far, and I would love to read more! The story was so intriguing, and I loved reading about Emily 's wurlwind of a life. I need to know how it ends!? Please :)"

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I don't know what my expectations were but they've been exceeded

"The characters feel fleshed out without taking forever describing everything about them. The situation is unbelievable yet somehow relatable. The writing is descriptive but not overbearing. Excellent all around "

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Thrilling

"BLUF: a sexy, thrilling tale of duality at its finest! DOWN: A few grammar issues, and not very balanced for a book with multiple POVs. MIXED: wordiness drags the narrative just a little, but the vivid descriptions of Liz’ psyche were so captivating (and, therefore, worth the pace). UP: everything else! Layered characters, powerful imagery, visceral experiences, all making this a riveting story of desperate extremes that kept me rapt. Sophia was a nice twist I wanted to follow further. Didn’t see The Moon coming (well, I did once that name came up but not before then). I recommend this book to anyone looking for more than your usual loin heaters. I would love to read sequels. Keep up the good work, I&E!"

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The Stripper

" A slow start into the storys plot but a rush into Emily's life. It was a Rollercoaster of emotion. The struggling student girl and her relationship with love. Twisted and wholesome, bdsm and vanilla. Her little villain arc was beautifully done. A sequel with more utilization of the side characters and more on their backround would be amazing. Every one of them has the potential to be a main character. 👏"

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Couldn't put this down.

"I loved this story. I read most of it in one night. I do hope you continue at least a short part of this story of what happened afterward, her schooling,who she ended up with, and more on Sun. I would definitely love to read more on this. This was a really interesting story, and I'm glad you went with it the way you did. I look forward to reading more stories from you.."

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The Stripper

"Thoroughly amazing works"

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Amazing

"Another book 2 please need to find out what happened next please "

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Good

"Th overall story was good the last few chapters had me a little confused and I’m not sure of how it really ended."

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The stripper

"Yes, I am one of those people who need to have everything answered to move on. So please, sequal or continue. What happened to Zombie and his sister. How did Chloe end up a single mom and what happened when her son mentioned Liz. Is Sun Emilys husband or someone else?"

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The Stripper!

"There wasn't anything within that wasn't worth reading or that I disliked. Yes I would advise anyone in general to read this gem of a book. I am hooked & hope you continue with the story until the end 🙏🙏. No pressure! "

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