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"I could read books by cosmic chaos all day, I enjoyed this one just as much as all the others I have read"

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Rock God

"For a short story, this is a beautiful love story full of real life situations. I absolutely loved reading this story, you are brilliant Cosmic Chaos, thank you. 👏👏👏❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰"

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Wham, bam, &thank you mam

"This was exactly as advertised - a quick, fun, well written story, that still touched on a variety of really deep and difficult subjects without making them the whole story or underrepresented their importance. "

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Rock God

"I found this story a bit emotional. Actually, a lot. But the story is very good, I loved it"

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Nice easy read

"How to describe overcoming mental health and the sacrifices families make to help. You grow up fast and learn to be as true to self as you can. That is this story, it has the beginnings of a happy ending, I would love to read a sequel- perhaps from the brothers perspective Nicely written "

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