nice but poorly executed

"I really liked the book, yes but unfortunately you crammed it all into one chapter and it made everything messed up. Here are some tips. 1. You need to get rid of the start writing here, all the authors in this app have managed to do it so far but if you are a novice I'll forgive you for that but please get rid of it. 2. Every time you do another chapter there is a button that said create new chapter, this can be useful so it doesn't look crammed. Otherwise good story but please make the changes as I suggested so your story can look more executed. Thanks for your consideration. "