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Hopefully

"Hopefully please "

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His Little Helion

"Amazing story. Really loved it❤️"

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His Little Hellion

"UNFAIR!! U breached the subject of Rich and Jace, then left us hanging, especially after Jace gets a little cozy at the party. So not fair lol. Whatever happened with William (her father)? Does Jace ever tell him he was the one Dale and his dad were trying to hurt and she was just collateral damage.? Does she know Dale and his dad were unalived? Need a sequel to this. PLEASE. Great story though. "

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Yes just yes!

"I am binge reading all these books! I can’t stop LOL. I would love to see a sequel or maybe a short spin off bc I have a feeling that relationship is going to morph into something more with rich and I’d really like to see what happens next. "

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Gripping and fun

"Another throughly enjoyable read from this author. The character of Rich had a significant change throughout from a darker sterner character to a very funny crazy puppy. The author has done this in another story (change a character drastically). It can be a little questionable but the resulting fun loving character is good reading with laugh out loud moments. My advice, try to really maintain the consistency in the sub-characters unless you give more story and reason as to why you’re changing our perception of them so drastically. It was also a little unbelievable that a drug addict wouldn’t be taken to a hospital for detox, considering the dangers. But that’s the beauty of a good fictional story - it’s all make believe. "

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His Little Hellion

"I've soon much enjoyed this story. My family caught me laughing soo much,that I had to read out loud the story to them. Yeah ,great time reading this book. It was a pleasure to read. I'd give you a 10 star if possible!!!!"

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Hellion

"Shocked. Enjoying this book the more that I read. It's thought provoking. Enlightening, is shows how evil this world is. People using innocent people for their si k pleasure. "

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