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Different

"This story took a different take on werewolves. "

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Cute short story

"I understand this was written for a contest, so it makes sense the story is on the short side. Given those parameters, I think this was a fun read! Lots of potential to flesh it out and add more details and resolve some answered questions. I'm excited to see any new and edited versions!"

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Snow white

"Lovely well written simple plain an sensible "

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Cute for a short read

"There is so much left unpacked in this story. Way to short for all the unanswered questions. It has so much going for it, however it is more of a lay out waiting for content to be added. This has great potential. I look forward to more in-depth sequels. "

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