What is your opinion?
Friendly note:
"This story is still being developed and has no editor, so expect some grammar and continuity issues in early updates. Feedback is welcome, but please read the chapters before judging the full story."
Dragon human story
"It has spelling grammar issues like there was no editor. No scene continuity. No sense. No storyline outside the exact same sexual assault scene. She shifts from strong to weak.He sounds like a mental headcase"
