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Love u

"I love this author so much her books are truly amazing. I have read many books of her and i hope to read more in fiture"

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Good story with a couple of fun twists

"To start with I had no idea what the definition of intersex was, I assumed I knew and was later proved wrong. I then looked it up and learned something new, which is always enjoyable. This was a great story, I've reread it a half dozen times so far. I just love the interaction between the MFC and her love interest. The playful interactions are a joy to read, it adds an element of fun in times when I need it. The story progresses pretty well, in the summary it told me who her love interests would be but the second professor was a surprise. I was expecting something else. That in itself was a good twist, I love being surprised in my assumptions as the story moves along. The MFC had a great group of friends who helped her through the book along with at least one mean girl, because these stories always have one. Her attitude though was surprising in the age in which the story was set, by that I mean I was under the impression it was in the period after NIL became a thing...only because a following book listed it as a thing. Since both books have elements of each in it, and the earlier book is referenced in the second...they follow each other in sports seasons. The MFC's family though was a bit off putting. What her father put her through, for no reason other than his religious cult beliefs, was cruel. She lived through it and came out stronger on the other side, but her mother was the weird one. Wouldn't stand up to the dad but still wanted him to be remembered as her dad. IMO this is a case where you go to the funeral just to ensure he actually died. I like to think that the reason Dad didn't like her was hers was bigger than his. The incident with the second professor was surprising, but I liked how the author ended the book and tied off all the threads. It's nice to read what happened to not just the main characters but the secondary level characters too. All in all a good book to while away the day and I heartily recommend it for anyone who enjoys sports stories. "

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Good work

"I am enjoying this story. Good plot and Iike the characters. "

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Love Lessons Learned

"Great book with an amazing writing style. Not many books like this"

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I love reading this so much

"I like everything in the story because that's just what i need in a story. The good level of joke, fun, sad, suspence and most importantly love. I would recommande this story at everyone who love reading lesbian love story with a touch of spicy, sweet, fun, and drama to it"

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LOVE IT!!

"I was sooo happy to be able to read this book again! I loved it the first time I read it & every time since. I have been wanting to re-read it but was unable to since wattpad took it down. Loiosh is an amazing author!"

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Just as good as the first time!

"Came here just to re-read this and it was fantastic! Missed this book so much!"

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Good read

"Good read wish it was more chapters "

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Great book!

"I loved this book! I'm so happy when people communicate and are honest...it's a nice break from all the drama books usually have so thanks for this! "

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