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Fire and Ice

"I know nothing about hockey but daaaamn! Fantastic job of building tension, on and off the ice, great chemistry between the characters, you know where this rivalry is heading, but I'll keep reading.The dialog is sharp, pacing is good, even if a bit heavy on descriptions, but it still works."

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Compelling and I can't wait for more!

"This first chapter has me hooked and I can't wait for more! And I don't even like hockey! These characters are so compelling and so different that I'm excited to see how things develop with them. One chapter in and I am a fan. The writing is excellent and this story is an absolute page scroller!"

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