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I’m scared!

"I am intrigued! I definitely want to know more about the main character, what happened to her brother, and how her protector turned into this MONSTER. The spelling and grammar is top notch and the plot is compelling. The first line was an instant hook for me…from there I could feel the mc’s fear….hence…. I’m scared! Looking forward to more 😊"

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