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Can’t Stop Reading

"I hope this book doesn’t end!!! "

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The Fae Queen

"This story is a great read so far and I can’t wait to see where it goes. The author does a great job at balancing plot with the relationships in the story. The pace of the story is good. The magic and world building in this is also well done. The author pulls it in well without doing any information dumps. The fmc Ameria is strong, and has a big presence. I love seeing fmc that don’t immediately fall for the Mmc, or expect them to fix everything. Her banter is great! I can’t wait to see where her story goes. If you like fae and magic, this story is definitely for you! Can’t wait to read more when it’s available "

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Immersive and Enjoyable

"Really solid worldbuilding and writing, with engaging characters and fun banter! A few typos here and there, but nothing that takes away from the story. If anything, I’d love a little more showing instead of telling, like, we get it, he’s gorgeous. 😆 The first-person POV switches were a bit jarring, especially since most of the story follows Ameria, but maybe that's just me. Also, some more guidance and hand holding for a reader less familiar with the tropes would be nice. Waiting eight chapters to understand what the Argon council is, just felt a bit long, and then the following world and kingdoms infodump breaks the flow of the story. But overall, a fun and easy read, I would keep going."

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Hooked

"The first chapter was enough to get me completely invested. Lovely details and dialogue! I can’t wait to see what the future holds."

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