What is your opinion?
Just great
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I want to read more
"Very imaginative. I like the way you're combining different mythologies and weird creatures into the story, centuars, vampires, bugs, dragons etc. Crossovers are big in lately I think. I liked the use of repeated words for emphasis such as with the aftermath scene early in the story. Shattered bodies, along with shattered possessions... I appreciate your unblinking narrative eye for sexuality throughout. I liked the description of the Scorpyeres anal sex-bulb--that's cool. This is just a personal thing with me, but the term member doesn't do much for me. Maybe b/c I'm a guy. But its hard to come up with synonyms for penis or vagina that really carry any weight. Double goes for the word sphincter. Sometimes English just doesn't seem prepared to describe love-making. One suggestion, though I realize this is not a final draft. Passive voice gets heavy in places. From Chapter 3 I think, She knew that Mason had finally gotten home from wherever it had been that he had gone after helping her in the office that morning. I would love to read more. There is enough here for a very long book maybe a trilogy. That said, hope Chapter 13 turns out as detailed as Chapter 10 and 16!"
