Customize readability
Aa

PERSISTES EN MI MENTE

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

Cuando el amor se marcha deja un vacío que nada puede remediar

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

1

Quisiera ya no sentir tu pérdida,


Pero sigue doliendo como la primera vez.


Quisiera no haberme mostrado tan ingenua,


Y así, tal vez, no estaría siendo una ridiculez.


Nunca llegué a sentir tanto amor por alguien como lo sentí por ti,


Aún así te fuiste y ahora no sé en lo que me convertí.


El suponer que estabas triste por mi ausencia


Fue un mentira que pensaba con frecuencia.


Un día, besando a alguien más te vi,


Y ahora mismo, no sé cómo sobreviví


Si habías jurado amarme toda la vida,


Pero tu amor se había ido junto a tu partida.

Let Alondra know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

1

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

1

Emotional

Profound

1

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

1

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

The Contract Wife

Lynne: Beautiful story very enjoyable.well done.

Read Now
The Easter Bunny

Lynne: Beautiful short story with a happy ending.luved it.

Read Now
Bloodlines

Ku_Rolet: The novel was good, and I really enjoyed reading it. I love the leads and their bond, but I have one question that confused me. How could Tristan have been dreaming about his mate since he was a child if Omara was already mated to someone else before him? If Kyle had accepted Omara, would Tristan ne...

Read Now
Fated to My Ex- Best Friend

Victoria: I liked how you described everything so clearly. It made the story very immersive. Do you plan to continue this story further?

Read Now
The Argent Wolf (Coming to Galatea)

Victoria: Your characters feel very real and well thought out. I liked that a lot. Which character is your favorite to write?

Read Now
Broken Halos MC

Lynn Hamilton: Author does an amazing job of creating a story that will make you feel like you’re there and part of the story. Very descriptive and well written. The book has a great plot that makes it interesting and coming back for more.

Read Now
Bear Shifter Secrets

Pam: Great Book is there going to be a sequel. I hope so i enjoyed the book immensely. Solid story line i just want more.

Read Now
My Horny Alien

Margaret Hines: I’m curious to see how Lily does in her new world.

Read Now
The Grumpy Next Door

Jane: A lovely story with good characters.

Read Now