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Interesting dynamic

"Interested to see how the dynamic grows with this."

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Well written book, just not for me

"I was looking for a gay smutty romantic spicy book, this story was not what I was looking for. It is well written, but for me it is too hardcore slave-master, it has no consent, no love, warmth, romance and for me it is not a sexy story. It is more of a mentally dark and twisted story. "

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Great novella on the extreme sides of bdsm

"I loved this short story. There’s a side to BDSM that isn’t always written about so I commend the author for choosing to write about it. Overall, a really good read. My reason for the 4 star review and not 5 star is in the writing not the actual plot which was fantastic. The writing itself had some grammatical errors which was okay but one of the chapters has one massive part which is then repeated underneath it which was confusing. There’s also a chapter with a small paragraph that seems to be a reply to a comment that’s found its way into the story by mistake. "

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