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Short and Sweet

"This one is short and sweet in every sense. It's such an adorable tale, refreshing in its written style. A quick read that's bound to put a smile on your face. While the main focus seems to be the couple in the restaurant, the main character to me was the waitress/hostess, for whom I hope to see a happy ending in a sequel if there should be one someday. "

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Restaurant of Love

"Great short story. You could expand with more stories and with character herself finding love. Great job!"

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Restaurant of Love 💞

"Oh, that was heartwarming, sweet, and a lil'dash of silly... 💖Loved It💖 A lovely pick-me-up too 💙💋💙💋💙"

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Restaurant of Love

"This is a cute and funny little story. I love the idea of a love restaurant. Great job, author 💞🩷💞"

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The Restaurant of Love

"I liked the concept and plot of the story, and the format with the 3 narrators. I'd like to know a bit more about why the couple are a perfect match, otherwise it's a little transactional. And maybe there could've been a reason Carmen didn't make a move, other than old fashioned gender stereotypes. I agree with the other comments that there's the potential for loads more fun with this concept and format. "

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