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La ventana de Rina

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Summary

Rina vivia aislada de la sociedad,su refugio era su casa en el bosque,hasta que empezaron a ocurrir cosas paranormales...Esto no es un libro,es un cuento,te aseguro que te maravillara.

Genre
Horror
Author
Adriana_13
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Creado por:Adriana.Saldivar de 13 a edad

Rina vivia aislada en un bosque,alejada de la sociedad,y disfrutaba de su tranquilidad hasta que empezaron a ocurrir cosas extrañas frente a su ventana.Durante el día,unas manos largas y que claramente no eran humanas aparecían en la ventana,mientras que por la noche se escuchaban intentos persistentes de habrir la ventana,acompañados de gritos ensordecedores que helaban la sangre.

Alarmada por estos sucesos,Rina decidió llamar a un exorcista.En la noche acordada,ambos se plantaron frente a la ventana.Una sombra humana se materializo en la ventana,tratando desesperadamente de romperla mientras lanzaba gritos que casi perforaban los tímpanos. Rina,presa del miedo,se acercó al exorcista en busca de protección.Sin embargo,al observarlo mejor,se dio cuenta con horror de que el exorcista no era lo que parecía.

Era la misma criatura que acechaba su ventana todas las noches.La criatura se abalanzó sobre Rina antes que pudiera reaccionar.

Atrapada contra la pared,fue testigo impotente de como la cristura le arrancaba los ojos y devoraba sus tímpanos,consumiendola viva.

Moraleja:Nunca mires por mucho tiempo tu ventana...

Noti:Yo misma cree esta historia y gracias a eso ahora me da miedo irme a dormir,por cierto,Rina,eres pendej@ o te haces?Si hay algo paranormal haciendo eso día y noche es obvio que debes huir no mames >:v

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