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I love the story intensely and I would love it and also be grateful if the writer continues the story.

"Masochistic, shriek, nitwit, airheaded, orchestrated, ruckus, perversion, pedophile, erratic, preposterous, fluster, delinquent, drowsy, whacky, flabbergasted, feigning, bluff, nostalgic, aforementioned, fuss, smirk. I like the way the way the book was orchestrated and I dislike that I didn't get to reach the end of the story due to incompletion. I will like to share it with my classmates. I gave it five rating because it was a wonderful work."

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The great falling plan from down under

"The story pulled me right from the start despite having read only 4 chapters posted. The first chapter was a bit slow but from the third chapter onwards, the pace picked up. There were some spelling mistakes which could be rectified. Otherwise a good story plot and I look forward to reading some more."

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