Room 206 by Angel Eva at Inkitt
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Room 206

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Summary

A short story about a man named Jerden, an exhausted office worker. It begins when a shadow starts to appear around him, and then a beautiful girl was in his room. "Who is this girl?!" That what he was thinking. And that what we will discover.

Genre
Mystery
Author
Angel Eva
Status
Complete
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

One dark night, while I was walking in the streets at exactly one o’clock in the morning, I was heading home after working late at the office. Suddenly, I saw a shadow walking in front of me, I closed my eyes for some seconds, then opened them, but I didn’t see anything. I told myself, “It must be the exhaustion and fatigue affecting me.”

I hurried towards my apartment, number 206, trying to get there as soon as possible.

I searched my bag for the key, only to realize it was missing. I looked for it here and there, but I didn’t find it. I was startled when my apartment door suddenly opened, and a white girl appeared in front of me, wearing a short white dress, and her black hair - which reached the middle of her back - was hanging down over her shoulders. She smiled and said:

- Why didn’t you ring the bell, dear?

I wondered to myself “Dear?! Who is this girl?!!”

I asked her, while doubt controlling my heart:

- Who are you?!

She looked at me in surprise, and after seconds of silence she answered:

- What’s wrong, dear?! You must be tired from working overtime again. Come in, I’ve prepared dinner.

I had no choice but to follow her inside. Where else could I go at this late hour?

" I’ll look into her matters tomorrow. ” I told myself.

We ate together, and it felt as it was normal, to the point that I asked myself if I had forgotten about her with all the extra-time aorking, but it’s impossible to forget such beauty.

I went in to take a shower, while she washed the dishes and arranged the kitchen. I came out to find that she had finished, and was waiting on the couch. She smiled at me, a smile I wished I could hold onto forever. I lowered my head and walked towards my room:

- I’m going to sleep, I have work tomorrow.

She answered as she got up to stand infront of the room’s door, preventing me from entering:

- You can’t sleep here, you will have to sleep on the couch tonight.

She smiled gently, while curiosity was killing me:

- Why can’t I sleep in My room?!

She answered while looking into my eyes:

- Because you won’t wake up early to go to work if you did.

- What makes you so sure?!

- Because this is what always happens, my dear.

She didn’t move away from the door of the room, and I didn’t dare to push her away. Exhaustion overwhelmed me, and I gave in to her words, and slept on the couch.

I woke up the next day to the sound of the alarm ringing at exactly seven in the morning. I got up, and went into the bathroom to wash my face, and brush my teeth. I came out to find her standing infront of me, I’m not exaggerating if I say that I feel my heart stop every time she looks at me, or appears in front of me.

She smiled:

- Get dressed, I’ll prepare a light breakfast.

I entered my room to get dressed. I still had that feeling I felt yesterday when I get in to get my pajamas from the closet, as if there was someone else. It’s a scary feeling, as if someone was watching me. I took my clothes, and put them on, ignoring everything I felt. I went out to find that she had prepared a sandwich and a cup of coffee. I sat down to start eating, I looked up at the wall clock, to find it stopping at exactly 01:30, I checked my wristwatch; it was almost eight.

- I only have half an hour left—will I make it on time?

She let out a soft laugh, one that captured my heart:

- You always say that, and you arrive exactly at the right time.

I got up after drinking the cup of coffee in a hurry, I went out of the apartment to see my neighbor coming out of her apartment as well, I said hello, but as usual, she didn’t pay me any attention.

I went to work, and her words were true, I arrived on time, I sat at my desk to start my usual work. While I was doing so, my friend Serhan, who is the closest person to me, came saying:

- Hello, Jerden, why do you look pale?!

I looked at him in surprise:

- What do you mean by pale, I am as always, fine and well.

- I bet you stayed up late yesterday again.

- Well, you know the head of the department, and how he likes to throw all the tasks at me.

- You should learn how to say “No”.

- As long as I can handle it, what’s the problem?! Now, go before he comes.

I spent the rest of that day working on the documents and papers that the head of the department had brought to me, so that I wouldn’t feel the time until the sky outside darkened. I looked at my wristwatch to find it stopped at exactly 01:30. I hit it twice to make it start, but to no avail. I looked at the wall clock to find it also stopped at 01:30. I got up from my desk to look for everyone, but I didn’t find anyone. I left the office to see the black shadow moving towards me. I was terrified. I took two steps back to bump into my friend Serhan, who grabbed my shoulder:

- What’s wrong with you, Jerden? What are you doing in the corridor at this time?! Do you want the head of the department to reprimand you?!

I looked around and saw everyone in their places, as if nothing had changed. Serhan looked at my face wondering:

- You definitely look pale, my friend.

I looked back at the corridor, searching for the black shadow, but I didn’t see it. I was surprised by the brightness of the sun. I looked at my watch to find that it was still 3:00 PM. I removed Serhan’s hand from my shoulder and headed to my office, while my heart beat was racing.

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