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Immortal: Rise of a Superhero

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Summary

What do you do when your final hope fails? What do you do when the people you are trying to protect are the reason for your own destruction? What do you do when you have to see your own world dying over and over again, and no matter what you do, you fail to protect it each and every time? That is when you recall. You recall each and every step that led to this, think, and try to find a solution for it because nobody else can. But the story is neither yours nor mine. This story is about Ahnaf, a normal high school guy living a perfect life in England with his mom. Suddenly, things take a turn when an accident occurs, and he starts developing superpowers. Read further to unravel the plot where a rookie hero explores his superhuman strength and rises up to protect his world from complete extinction-or maybe sinks it down to complete annihilation. Now with added pictures to liven the story with the help of AI.

Genre
Action,Fantasy
Author
Ahnaf
Status
Complete
Chapters
40
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Prologue: The End Again

It all starts with words. All I see now is the Crimson Ball of Destruction, looming ominously above, snuffing the life out of everything, reducing all to ash, and shattering the Earth into fragments. Over and over. No matter how many times I return, no matter how many allies I gather to fight it, the outcome remains unchanged. I watch my friends confront it while I stand paralyzed, their desperate attempts to save our world unfolding before my eyes as I do nothing but hope. But it all ends the same.


As I gaze back at the horizon, preparing to begin the cycle anew, a flicker of hope ignites within me—perhaps this time will be different. And then I run, faster and faster, my mind racing with thoughts of how it all began, what I could have done to prevent this catastrophe. But this is not my story. I am merely a pawn in this grand scheme. This is the story of my best friend, Ahnaf Sohail, and to unravel what transpired, we must start from the beginning.


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