What is your opinion?
Intriguing plot & vividly drawn characters
"I thoroughly enjoyed the first five chapters. The world is vividly created, I can see the world the characters live in as if I'd been there. The first chapter in particular is beautifully written. I hope the bully's character is developed so she's not wholly bad, just because the best antagonists have good points, and the greatest hero's have their flaws. I'm totally intrigued by the heroines story. How and why is Javier drawn to her and the locket? Can't wait to read more!"
How the story will reveal
"The mystery surrounding Evie is intriguing, and the descriptive writing creates a chilling atmosphere. I'm hooked and can't wait to see what secrets are revealed! 👀 "
Beautiful Narration
"I loved your writing style, Ann. The narration is spot-on. A good character description, even the slightest emotions are clearly crafted. I am waiting for what will happen next. It's quite engaging; I am glad the MC is a vivacious, happy woman, not some sad, lonely person. It's a refreshing start; I am sure this one will end well. Keep up the good work:)"
I can't wait for more!
"I love the author's writing style, it's cleverly detailed and smooth. I also enjoyed the dialogues, as they give a lot of information about each of the characters' unique personalities. I really appreciate the way the plot unfolds, by introducing us to Evie's life and giving us hints as to who she may actually be, without revealing it, which sparked my curiosity. The way the story is written, with short chapters and intriguing interactions between the characters makes me want to read more. I'm not usually into romance fiction, but this story definitely caught my full attention. "
