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Ms.Tonya

" I like this chapter but i do think they both need counseling . Madison has more going on inside of her head . I do think she blames Liam for the past . Liam is not a forgiving person. He needs to know how to compromise, You don't get what you want all the time . Its her body . That's what i see going on , they need a little help . They both are hurting . "

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Time and patience

"Madison was wrong in keeping her husband in the dark about birth control. Also, I think Madison blames Liam for the loss of their first baby. Madison needs to have a conversation with the ladies but she needed to tell Kendra why she and Liam are truly having issues because she just sugar coated the whole thing. Liam has every right to feel how he is feeling because marriage is about trust and that is something that Madison has broken. She brought up counseling so why didn’t she do that before going on the pill without her husband knowledge."

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Madison's Pain

"The perfect who is to love and understand you more than anyone else doesn't get you. It's sad to said it's time to separate and evaluate the relationship and dynamics. Is the relationship worth keeping your would co-parenting be the best solution. I may sound selfish but I feel Liam has never been in true love with Madison. I've always felt that she was his possession to treat and do as he pleased so maybe Madison can grow up; lover herself more that she loves Liam and move on. If not then she'll teach her daughter that women are weak and we have no voice because we don't make ourselves a priority. I love all your books and I just need Madison to be more like Nicole. "

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Harsh truths

"Well damn I always believe angry sex it hot and it so is. Yes by not telling him that she was on birth control cuts deep but I hope he realizes yeah we may need to talked to someone. They love each other but past will keep haunted you if you don't fix it and heal from it."

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