What is your opinion?
Eova, first contact story
"Awsome story, I loved the characters and the Eova the way the held no grudges was great. I loved their freeze guns and the way they shared their technologies enve with their enemies. "
Top tier
"It's a very very good story, it's slow to build like the writer is learning how to write at first but eventually the story finishes and it feels complete, every string is tied nicely and easily. One critique: There is a monotone element The writer repeats phrases often , sometimes it's because their use of paragraphs don't really seperate the ideas, or maybe it's the lack of a substitute if the word weight. Mostly I think the writer just enjoyed writing certain moments but couldn't approach others, it would certainly be interesting to see how the story would be developed if the emotions (the weight of the room was upon me -> the silence was deafening ) was made more through imagery rather than just "weight" Apart from that one complaint it's honestly an amazing story in world building, romance, and sci-fi aspects "
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"This story blew me away. It’s emotional, tense, and full of heart. Thriexa is such a strong, unique alien character, and her bond with Jace was beautiful to watch grow. Their connection felt real and earned, and the ending left me thinking about it long after. If you like sci-fi with deep feelings and a slow-burn bond, this one’s for you."
