Inkitt
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5 stars.

"Loved it, very powerful words, weaved together to create such a strong passage of writing. Thank you for sharing. "

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Abby Rose

"I love this. The descriptions, the images, the difference in sentence length. It is powerful and I relate to it deeply. I hope you keep this up. Beautiful."

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