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Different but good

"The story really pulled me in. It had just the right amount of drama and suspense and the main characters are all likeable. Some have mentioned spelling issues, but they were not so bad that it took away from the story."

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Breaking the Bond that Binds

"This story is likely being on a roller coaster with all the ups and downs and twists and turns. I laughed cried and got so mad I threw my phone. I love the relationships between Virgil and the friends he made along the crazy journey he found himself on. I’m glad Virgil found happiness in the end because he deserved it. This is an incredible story and I would definitely recommend it. Fantastic job author. 💞🩷💞"

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Breaking the bond that binds

"Greatly enjoyed reading. Emoțional. Funny. Entertaining. Delightful, easy to follow, light style."

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A good read. It's a must on Lycans

"This is an Australian author, the story is fantastic and had me laughing like mad or fearing and crying in the next chapter Some spelling/grammar issues for those who're picky but after a read through these can be corrected"

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Bonds that bind

"I am really enjoying this book so far. The author’s writing style is heartwarming with a deft touch of humor; he makes the characters so appealing. I am rooting for them and can’t wait until they really get together (although I do wish their first sex scene was more explicit 😁). "

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breaking the bond that binds

" In answer to your question……..how explicit your sex scenes are is up to you. Inkitt has an erotic category that can be as sexy as you like. I love your story for what it a different take on wolf sex problems . My only critique is your lack of proofreading your chapters be for you post them. Am looking forward to more of your story. Bill lesburg "

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Intriging

"After the rejection, it was a bit slow, but then it took a turn for good. I like that there's no OW drama, James is no threat . I like that Virgil is fighting the bond, of course he's not a weakling. Damien suffering is chef kiss. It's about time someone write about the mmc suffering after rejecting. I hope to see a lot of groveling from Damien before Virgil's acceptance. "

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