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This story keeps me engaged. I like the subject matter.

"The story is very relatable. The narrator, at one point, longs for a better family life, and explains why in a detailed manner that helps the reader understand."

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wow uhh

"amazing and beautiful writing style. I need more honestly. if ur comfotable with it, touch on 7th grade and 8th. you left that kind vague. honestly I forgot like all of it so need a refresher. and talk to me. I emailed u."

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