Hilarious and intriguing

"I REALLY enjoyed reading this first chapter. It was funny, it had a good draw to it, and it left me wanting more. Several times I was chuckling during this story, and I can already tell that the protagonist is one that I can support. I love her sense of humor and the sarcastic tone that is so inherent in your writing. The bee part and the kareoke scene were so hilarious! It was really fun just watching your characters interact. I think that you could probably add more setting and description to this, so that the reader has a better sense of character, time, and place. More setting would also add to the build-up right before the car accident. Other than that, all I noticed were some grammatical issues and missing words here and there. This is a really good start, and I would definitely read more of this. Also, I just noticed, I think the title should read "If We're Meant to Be" instead of "If were mean't to be". All in all, great work! I can't wait to see where this goes!"