What is your opinion?
Love it!!
"I’m on chapter 2 and I’m already hooked on this book! I love it so far. "
Immediate Goosebumps
"Thank you for sharing such a deeply emotional and personal story. It’s clear that you’ve poured your heart into this piece, and it really resonated with me. The raw honesty and vulnerability in your writing are powerful, and I found myself deeply moved by the emotions you conveyed. Your use of imagery is stunning—I could feel the weight of the emotions in every line. The way you describe your feelings towards your father was particularly striking, and it stayed with me long after I finished reading. One suggestion I have is to consider expanding on why you were living with your father, where is your mother? You may have a good reason to not focus on this but you seem open to share these traumatic experiences. I think delving a bit deeper here could add even more layers to the emotional journey. I know this was only the first few chapters and perhaps you have this part planned for a later chapter but even a brief mention of something you plan to elaborate more on will have the reader wanting to read more to discover what happened. This is a beautiful and heartfelt piece, and I admire your bravery in sharing something so personal. Writing about such raw emotions is never easy, but you’ve done it with grace and authenticity. I hope you continue to write and share your work—your voice is important, and stories like this have the power to touch so many people. Thank you for letting us into your world. I wish I could hug you! I have things from growing up in a complicated home environment in my personal life and you may have inspired me to be more vulnerable in my own writing. Keep writing - I hope it helps you heal."
