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Seb Alara

"This story was so much of I became engrossed in it, she’d tears so ,any times I can’t even tell you how many times. Great story and so heartwarming. Well done!"

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Falling for forbidden

"Came back to write review so that it might hopefully push to more Readers, goddamn this is a rollercoaster of emotions, I felt all . Cat and mouse , frendship, steamy , emotional. LOVE godd it's worth all the chapters glad i read till last. ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️🤌"

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Falling For Forbidden

"🥰 loved the story, great characters wonderful storyline. I didn’t realize that Rafael and the guy on the motorcycle were the same person until deep into the book, but it made sense. And then making Sebastian and Rafael the same person was brilliant. He got to carry on without having his name associated with his murderous father. ❤️ loved the ending. Well written and thank you for sharing your personal journey. "

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Very Compelling

"So much emotion, this book. The very first romance book I survived reading to the end without skipping chapters, because it's unpredictable. It's too good to put down. Please, Author, don't stop making stories. "

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Love Forever

"I enjoyed the book. Lots of plots. A little too long but I like a sappy ending."

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Great I want to finish it ty for wrighing it can’t wait to finish it

"I want to finish it I pray they forgive him and move on have babies "

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Very suspenseful and well written.

"The author does an amazing job pulling you in and keeping you on the edge of your seat, waiting for the next step. I love how suspenseful it is."

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Enjoyed !

"I honestly enjoyed this book, the twists and turns had me on edge and at times confused. I went through so many emotions as I read this book, so happy I found this. I hope all is well with the writer, their family and neighbors. "

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Awesome

"Very good writing style. Excellent plot .Love it"

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Falling for forbidden

"👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻"

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❤️😒😤😳

"I wrote this in my comments as well, but thought it should be in your review section too. I am crying happy tears for Amara & Sebastian. You wove a lovely, heartfelt, suspenseful, adventure thatI couldn’t out down. I loved watching them both climb out of their tormented lives to something brighter. Thank you author"

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Falling for the forbidden

"This is a captivating story of survival and resilience. The author has a way of drawing you in, experiencing everything emotion of pain, tragedy and love in the most unexpected way. "

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Blissful Reader

"A very interesting read. I love the boook and I’ll stick to see what happens next. "

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Falling for forbidden

"A well written book however it dragged on which took the sparkle away."

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Suspenseful

"It’s a nice story. "

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The forbidden yet sweet

"Love the story line. Need cleaning up on some parts though"

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