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So good

"I am loving this story so far. I know Jesse and Drew are end game but lord it’s been really hard to like him sometime’s. I would definitely recommend this book. I love everything Mackenzie writes."

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Pipe Dreams

"I really love this book and just hope it has a happy ending. I think Mackenzie has a really great writing style. I'll be some of her others! "

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Excellent book

"I have enjoyed the story and plot twists..keeps you interested and it is not easy to guess what is going to happen next."

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Excellent read

"Between the characters "

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Nice

"Sometimes it’s easier to write now you feel rather than saying it. Nicely done author. Running away was not the answer. "

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If she is fishing...I am on the hook

"Discovered this book on a scammed ad and thankfully her hidden message in the chapters led me here. I am loving the dynamics. My heart breaks for everyone involved and I am so curious to see where this leads."

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Addicted

"I’m kind of addicted to this book right now and I can not wait to finish it tonight "

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Love this story

"Pipe dream has been something I’ve been wanting to read since I saw it on W.A. Mackenzie and her writing are the main reason on got an account on this app and I’m happy I did. I cannot wait to see dodger dig himself out of this whole but right now I’m so so pissed with him. If he was my man ohh I would’ve done worse than walk away. I’m glad Jesse did though he deserves it idc the reason "

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Pipe Dream

"The characters are well developed and I'm enjoying the story so far. Tear jerker and all."

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Great story worth a read

"She’s dreadful, at least he has been faithful and not been with her... but I wonder if she’s the one snitching to Jesse’s dad and that’s how come he’s harassing for money "

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Drawn in from the start

"I searched for you when I was on Facebook and got a ad for a PPC site read the little bit that was there and started searching the web. I found it first on Wattpad then had to come Ink it as I just fell in love with this book right from the start. Please keep going it is a wonderful book so far"

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Maryanne

"Love it so far wonder what he is hiding can’t wait to see what comes next "

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So good

"So good but I understand why you need a break - had me in tears"

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Loving it so far

"Loving the story so far, looking forward to the next chapter "

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Pipe Dream

"This book has been a tear jerker for me. I can’t wait to see where it goes from here"

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Pipe dream

"I really like and have enjoyed the story so far. They have to talk and he has to confess what and why he acted as he did. Married couples would hear each other out regardless of the betrayal as they would want to know why. WHY? I think she would feel betrayed that even drunk he let Brittany touch him. Even the kiss on his cheek was a betrayal. The abandonment, you really feel that loneliness. This story is extremely well written and I’m enjoying it. I’m 52, married for 30 years and can empathise with the loss of her Mum from a long drawn out illness. The author has crafted this story wonderfully, such heart breaking loss. Looking forward to the rest of the story in time when you’re ready to write it. Thank you. "

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Love it

"When are we getting more of this story "

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Pipe dreams

"It has held my attention and it is interesting. Glad there is no cheating. Proof reading would be helpful "

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Great read

"Love this book so far. I love reading mc novels and this is a second chance and groveling and all. Love it. I hate that she was left alone and no one was there for her when she needed and they should all feel bad for abandoning her when she is one of them. "

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Love it

"Love the story line. Can’t wait for an update. Hope they get back together after they hash it out. A baby in pipeline would blow this story out of the water. The suspense is both torture and thrilling. Can’t wait to see where the author takes this story. It’ll be off the hook I reckon"

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