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The Unbelievable Passion

"I haven’t read something this good since my Wattpad days back in high school! The passion between the male and female leads. The support of the best friend and beta. The slow burning love from a “one night stand” in a storeroom to being marked. You can tell April cares for Luca a lot, even before being marked. She went through the stages of denial so clearly! I am loving every chapter of this!"

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Amazing story

"I really loved the story. I loved April’s character and I enjoyed Luca too. Jess was a great bestie as well. I loved how the storyline developed from beginning to end. I was hooked!"

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Impressive Story

"A captivating fantasy with a beautifully crafted storyline and characters. The impressive plot completely transported me, and the writing was exceptional. Keep up the amazing work 👏🏾!"

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Taming Fire

"this was an amazing read, enjoyed from beginning to end."

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about the story

"nice creativity loved it "

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Taming Fire

"Great little book. "

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Great so far!

"Perfect mix of possessive alpha and stubborn woman. Spicy plot with a purpose, grammar is grammaring, what's not to like?!"

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Taming fire

"I love the story. It was funny and romantic and steamy. It was short and sweet."

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Enjoying it

"A good read 📚 like the speed of it as it plays out."

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Great

"First time to read this kind of fantasy and I am liking it! Things are not dragged, just happening quickly. "

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None

"I'm in love with how the book is so direct and still very captivating "

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Lovely

"So satisfying "

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Compelling page turner

"So far I've really enjoyed the story and the build up. The main characters are being gradually developed. I would love to see more of Alpha Luca's thought process to balance out April's. Overall the pace and then plot are working."

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Love

"I am very much enjoying...well written!! Excellent leisure time entertainment...Keep up the good work...love love love love"

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Steamy Review

"The story was very interesting. I loved the plot and how everything played out. A job well done. I was always on the edge of seat wondering what was coming next. "

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Tameing fire

"Its keeping me invested in the story"

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Amazing

"Loved this story and how you could feel the emotions and energy!"

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Great story

"Really enjoyed this story, strong characters, emotions up and down. Fab 😄"

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Taming Fire

" This is practically the definition of perfection. It’s written in something of a modern way. When some people think “well written” they think something super wordy and extensive and makes you want to do literally anything else. Like a classic that’s overly descriptive like “The Great Gatsby” or an essay for a college midterm or something.(Not that I don’t think this author is capable of that—she most definitely is!) I just truly admire the way this is written where it doesn’t feel like a chore to read. It’s at an appropriate reading level that sounds intelligent alongside a wonderful reading experience!!"

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Taming fire

"I couldn't put it down. Read it in one day. I highly recommend reading this "

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