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An Interesting Read

"A sheltered boy in a strict Christian upbringing falls in love with a goat demon and loses his faith while trying to avoid malevolent demons. It's reminiscent of The Summer Hikaru Died. It's a very well written story, although it reads like a manual at times with its exposition. I think the issue is that there's a lot of information to convey in only eight chapters, so a lot of it is just dumped on the reader instead of woven naturally into the story. Overall, it was a fascinating and well written story that was exactly as the description and tags made it out to be. It would be a cathartic read for an ex-Christian with religious trauma, but an offensive read for any practicing Christian. I don't know what else to say about it. I thought the ending was perfect."

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