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Outstanding!

"Indiana Jones and Lara croft rolled in one. The heroine , a small pixie ( don;t let her heard this for my own health) fights against a cult of necromancer who want to enslave France . From Mexic to France, Chance and her sidecick Wes destroy every plan of the cult showing them that size doesn't matter, all what it counts it's just determination ."

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Dan Brown has competiton

"This review is based on the first four chapters. I love the concept, the story is catchy and original. Think Indiana Jones with Winchester rifle. The characterisation is good and I can sense I'm going to enjoy seeing how the protagonist develops throughout the novel."

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