Die überraschung by Lupus_in_Fabula at Inkitt
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Die Überraschung

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Summary

Ob es sich lohnt aufzustehen? Hoffentlich, ich fühle mich wie eine Leiche.

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Complete
Chapters
1
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Age Rating
13+

Kapitel 1

Hustend torkelte ich zur Tür. Der Schnupfen hat mich so sehr aus den Latschen gehauen, dass ich wie der Tod persönlich aussah.Meine Haare fettig, meine Kleidung fleckig. Meine Nase so rot, als hätte ich die letzten Wochen nur in Kneipen verbracht. Wer auch immer mich besuchen käme, würde den Schock seines Lebens bekommen.

Überrascht blickte ich auf das Paket. Auf der handgeschriebenen Karte liebe Grüssen und Besserungswünsche.

Ich zündete die Honigkerze des selbstgemachten Adventkranzes an und ass einen weichen Schokokeks. Den ersten Advent hätte ich vollkommen vergessen.

Aber eine liebe Seele hat an mich gedacht und das war grossartig.

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