What is your opinion?
Really loved it..
"Loved it.. really interesting. Where is the rest,?"
More please
"Is there more coming "
This is really good so far.
"Are you updating anytime soon this is compelling!"
The monster below
"I really wish the chapters were longer but this book is so good and I can’t wait to keep reading it!"
Cassie
"Really good so far can't wait to see what happens next "
Love love love this book so far!
"The plot is amazing so far and I can’t wait for what happens next! "
Monster below
"I have really enjoyed reading this story. I hope ican find more stories by this writer. Keep up the good work"
Good
"This book is very interesting. The grammar and spelling are a bit off, but it's still very good. "
The monster below
"I enjoy the way I'm able to connect to the characters and feelings they have"
The darkness below
"It seems to be an original plot. The story grabs your attention in the beginning and holds on tight. I couldn't wait for Reidar to make an appearance. "
Awesome & Engaging
"And just when the story was getting good...dangit!!!"
Damnnn
"I thought it would be a generic book about a girl who falls in love with a demon or mosrer but...wow...just wow"
A little slow, can't tell what it's about
"It writing is good, but, the plot isn't there. It's not enough to intrigue a reader"
A few technical problems...
"This piece needs some more proofreading. All the typos and mistakes really took me out of the story unfortunately :( Luckily you can do that after you've posted without losing any votes. I noticed some misspelled words like "wirred" and the improper use of "your" vs you're" Also there were some grammar issues, like quotation marks being in the wrong place, missing commas, improper use of italics, and dialogue not being properly separated from paragraphs. Otherwise I thought the story was really interesting. I like how authentic the voice was, especially since it was in first person. it definitely sounded like someone who is young and confused about all the strange occurrences happening in her life. The cliff hanger definitely had me thinking about what could happen next. I hope you are adding in the final chapter soon, I just know something sinister is going to happen at the dance!!! :) Good job!"
