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What is your opinion?
Well done so far.
"I don’t like any of the parents. I feel bad for the couple and hope they can bond enough to form a united front against the older generation. If there’s one thing I would change it would be to add some depth to the parents’ characters, but that might complicate things to the point where the audience would need a longer book before they could decide who was most sympathetic. On second thought, keep it the way it is! 😀"
Scars on my heart
"Really like the plot of this story its a light romance close to reality. I would recommend it to my husband who is a hopeless romantic person..."
