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Great

"The book is great to read "

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Awesome story, horrible grammar

"The story is incredible, but can tell this wasn't edited at all....."

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Story is wonderful

"I love the story, little space is so cute for me. I'm in another country from the author and I think that is why there's a lot more grammar and spelling issues but it doesn't retract from the story. "

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"Loving the book so far my only complaint is its kinda confusing how it starts it says about the boy shrinking. But no info as to why, no intro into the story ur just dropped in.. no explaining for why the body hair disappears or the bed wetting and loss of control happens. As adults we dont go from being fine to not cuz a test says so???. I get being put as a little but what causes the change to start the change. ? Would be great just a short explain why...to understand where the author was coming from... also im not perfect in spelling so I cant be too harsh but there is a lot of spelling issues where instead of him or his it says her.. or instead of here it says her. Not huge issues but there r mess ups throught.. i belive may be due to different language was maybe written in. Seems like could be a brittish story maybe as some words r different. Like shortalls or dungarees is used a lot an several other words that dont seem as commen. Author did an amazing job on this book i read lots of dom books this was easy to follow not a fully sexual book like others can be was a great read!!! The book has a great story line explains feelings and emotions well and all. Over all would diff read again and recommend to friends!!!! "

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I Can't Be Little

"Get ready for this bittersweet story to hold your emotions hostage as you get most of this story from the POV of six guys sharing a house as they attend university while also learning how to adapt to new unexpected roles and responsibilities in their young lives."

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Good story, grammar isn’t very good

"The story/plot is great. A little repetitive with the caregiving at times but I was invested from the start. The grammar and punctuation is pretty bad though. Misspellings, wrong word choices, sometimes made it difficult to read. "

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