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Interesting Ideas, But Needs Work

"I very much like Spider-Man and associated Marvel Comics mythology, but this story was very difficult to follow. It brought together a lot of different ideas abruptly and without sufficient explanation to hold it together. Provided some work is done on the plot, the skeleton for an interesting story is there."

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