What is your opinion?
Charming
"What a delightful little creation story The writing style was perfect for this type of myth, giving it a 'handed down from the dawn of time' feel . I plan to read it to my young daughter who I am sure will enjoy it as much as I did."
Touching and Sensitive
"This story really was touching to me. It was lovely in the way it put together the old Bible story of Creation and took a new spin on it. It was all about the duality of things. The further you look into the story the more you see about the psychical and spiritual sides of things. Sides of the same coin. I thought the way it was written really added to the tale. It reads like a story you would tell around a campfire to your children. A tale of comfort full of the highs and lows of life and beyond. I wish I could say more about this right now but I am moved almost to have no words. Thank you for writing this."
Very Enjoyable
"I loved the simplistic flow of the story, and the creative approach taken here. The fact that you named the earth, the moon, etc, made it feel more personal. Your description of the events played a movie in my head. The sentences were clean and easy. Wonderful job."
