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Their Girl

"Amazing relationship between the three men to be able to love and share Alessandra as the do. On the other hand, the big plot twist of Antonio outsmarting them and getting around them to Ohio, was so obvious. As soon as they mentioned sending her, you knew it was coming. And you knew the boys would attack and Antonio wouldn’t be there."

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their girl

"one of them that jus leaves you speechless"

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The girl

"This is a very good book good spicy moments"

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Lovely

"I love the book thank you"

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Hot

"I love her spunk, her fearlessness around these three. She feels safe finally"

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Just keeps getting better!

"I absolutely loved this book!! Hooked from start to finish and loved the ending!"

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I New Antonio was going to Ohio to get.her .It was to obvious they will get here hopefully in time.

"There was only a few miss spel words.Good plot I've really enjoyed reading .I like how they treated her excellent story. "

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Impressed

"For being one of your first stories, I am impressed. The storyline is suspenseful (the sex is awesome), and I have enjoyed the plot. Love all the characters but sway towards Team Lorenzo. Thoroughly enjoyed this and I want more! There was only one small downside - using BOLD for the conversations. It tended to draw the eyes away from the paragraphs and so I found myself going back many times to read fully. Regardless, congratulations on a really good story. I'm ready for Book 2"

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Their Girl

"Amazing story and I wonder how all of this will end."

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Good read but....

"Thye couldve easliy let her go too....besides the sex what else was there in the relationship? Otherwise good read"

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THIS WAS AMAZING!!!

"I never thought, I'd love it this much when I started reading it. you clearly have a talent. I finished it in 3 days. I want more ngl. this was too good and it'd be a shame if it stopped anytime soon or went on an over longed break. please, release more chapters because I am ENGROSSED by this. also, side note: no pressure, if you want a break please do take it because this was pure talent. go at your own pace. :3 "

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💕🔥⚡️🫶🏼

"Great story!!!! "

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Great!

"Great novel! Extraordinary love story what tenses to t8end and inevitable happens. "

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Absolutely love

"I absolutely love this so far "

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their girl

"READ IT NOW !!!! DONT WAIT JUST READ IVE BEEN LOOKING FOR SOMETHING TO KEEP MY ATTENTION AND THIS HAD ME FROZE IN TIME CHILEEEE!"

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Their Girl

"I have read this triology more than 5 times now and each time am captivated . The author wetting skills gere is top notch . Plot developments and twists superb . Still yet to find a series that beat this though !! "

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Love this exciting and erotic

"Really well written story enjoying it so far and the suspense is killing me into her past evil step brother "

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Their girl

"Great story with great characters. I loved the story but hate the ending. I believe a book should be an entries story from woe to go not leave it up in the air for a sequel."

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Fun story

"Well written. A very good read. Great characters and dialog. "

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Their girl

"I like all of it. The suspense, the sex, how the boys all genuinely care for her, even while teaching her about sex for the first time.Great writing! "

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