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This is a surprise

"Tbh i pass on reading this one for some time. I was sure id get into the plot. Boy was i wrong this has all the makings for perfection. I completely enjoyed the story an characters had my heart from the very 1st page. Author is truly talented an is my fav . "

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Aloha

"Nice wrok u did a great job"

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Love!

"Can’t stop reading!!! So exciting!"

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On the story

" The story so far I have read has me glued to it and although, at the start of chapter 20, there is a mention of a Hannah which has never been talked about before. I don't think that it is done purposely. Besides, the work is good. Pretty descriptive if you ask me. But then again, the author has done a great job. Can't wait for more chapters to be released "

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What goes here

"Enjoy this new author for me "

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Sizzling Adventure Sci Fi Fantasy Romance

"A thrilling blend of sci-fi adventure, fantasy, and sizzling romance, it captivates with its vivid world-building and intense characters. Carina, a fierce Chief Guardian, finds herself on a planet ruled by the dominant twin Alpha Kings. The author’s imagination is stunning, seamlessly blending advanced technology, primal instincts, and deep lore. With heart-pounding action, scorching chemistry, and a gripping plot, this book is a must-read for fans of sci-fi romance and fated mates tropes."

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Sometimes hard to follow

"So many things don't make sense and they just keep adding up the closer you get to the end "

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Good idea meets landmine.

"First thoughts. Good idea, started off ok and then fell apart in the first 2 chapters. Let me get this straight. Military trained soldier escapes from a high tech world under orders after a coup. Ends up on a medieval, or worse, planet that contains a mineral she needs in quantity, and gets captured by twin monstrous alphas inside 5 minutes. Her military training, speed and abilities are useless against them and now she's their mate. I guess they ordered her on mates r us. "

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