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An Engaging Read!

"This story was quick to draw me in, the premise is pretty unique. It demonstrates the allure and consequences of temptations and the human flaws we all have. Chelsea's struggle is relatable, and it's easy to root for her success. I quite like the technology introduced to help her, it's creative and very sci-fi but still potentially realistic. It lends itself well to some fun concepts that are well executed and tie in to the character development of her and the doctors alike.. The relationships between characters are done well too, the choices they make are interesting, funny, or frustrating. I had characters I loved and characters I hated, which only made me want to keep reading. There were some grotesque parts that I didn't enjoy as much, but that's just personal taste. They still fit thematically and made sense for the plot. The formatting made it easy to read and helped the paragraphs flow. I found the pacing suitable too, somewhat repetitive but building up to a breaking point. I appreciate the ending where no characters are forgotten about and loose ends are resolved. Overall I would definitely recommend this book, I had a good time reading it :)"

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