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"Interesting story but slow updates "

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Nice story

"Nice story"

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Good plot good twists and turns

"Anxious to read more"

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Can’t wait to read more!

"Intriguing plot and strong characters. I enjoyed reading this very much, thank you! "

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True Luna

"I like the plot and the characters "

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Alpha’s defendant mate

"I love the story line so far. It would be interesting to see how far the mother will go against her son and I would love to see the girl actually win the hearts of the pack and become a wonderful Luna."

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Alpha Defiant Mate

"Good story that keeps you engrossed. Nice dynamic between the major characters that keeps you coming back to see how it will end."

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The Alpha 's Defiant Mate

"Good story. Loving it so far. Mom and Naomi are total butches. Hoping Aria knock their asses down a few pegs. "

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Eleanore

"I believe she is falling in love with him"

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The alpha's defiant mate

"Hope you have a sequel to this book, but it's a great read. I just need to know what happened "

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suspense

"It has kept me in constant suspense of the love/hate relationship between the mates I am not sure how she became the mate yet after killing her entire family but I expect I will learn that as i go. I am enjoying it very much"

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Book

"Having to rate to continue..."

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Kind of confusing

"It is hard to pin point an exact time line of when this story takes place. But I am assuming before cars were invented and that is why they use chariots. What I don’t understand is how dense these characters are. Why did the Alpha continue to refer to his mate as his guest and why all of the other “werewolves” act more human than wolf. She is the Alphas mate, not potential Luna. She will be Luna unless they break the mate bond which he has no intention of doing. And why on Gods green Earth did he leave her alone with his deluded mother, the same individual that sent her to the dungeon for three days with no food or water? I am going to assume that he has no common sense. The other thing that is irksome is everyone referring to her as a rogue. She is only a rogue because he killed her pack, not because she was banished from a pack or born in the wild. And how do they, all of a sudden, know she is an Omega if they can not sent her?"

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Nice book

"It is nice but the story is a bit slow"

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Weird

"Written by ChatGPT or some similar program and hard to understand the word choices in most paragraphs. Technology has come a long way and hopefully continues to evolve ."

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The alphas defiant mate

"Needs to be edited and the writing is only so so"

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