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Worlds within Worlds

"Dane is such an interesting character. He reaches in and grabs hold of your heart. I don't know about anyone else, but I'm getting certain vibes from him that will dramatically shift the projection of his character if it's true. I'm saying this now, so I can come back and add as the events unfold. Be prepared for long readings with this one. Take your time with these chapters. If I had been rushing through this, I would have missed so many cute quirks about him. Like the respect for his parents that he has BY calling them my their name - as equals to him. Or the fact that he doesn't know how to handle liking a girl."

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