Inkitt
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Writing is too good for anything less than 5*

"Ok so I have currently only read the first chapter, but to my eye it is flawless. The writing great, suspenseful and very well thought out. I can feel the smoke in my lungs and fear of getting caught. I am excited to see where this goes. Cyber and Tech are not really my thing but in the right hands any subject can be a great story and this is set up to be great. "

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