What is your opinion?
Creepy crawly nightmare
"Kept my interest. Plays out like an old Twilight Zone ep. I didn't expect guy to be dead, I thought he was having a premonition about someone coming to kill him. Intriguing tale. Best of luck to the author."
Horrifying!
"To imagine something like this actually happening is completely and utterly horrifying! As a person who always wakes up in the middle of the night, this story kept me awake even longer than usual as I was too afraid to try and sleep. This story is very reminiscent of Twilight Zone. I could definitely see this as an episode! Kudos!"
Let me sleep!
"What a creepy feeling this story has, it really makes you think. The detail in the story is fantastic. It puts the fear back in to sleeping time. The dread of falling asleep reminds me of Nightmare on Elm St."
What??!!!
"Great story, the twist at the end was brilliant!! Waking up in the middle of the night will never be the same; guess I'll be thankful to realize each time that I am truly awake and alive. Keep writing, can't wait for your next story!"
3:44 AM!!
"I love the twist in the end. Great story that takes you into the situation trying to understand what might be happening next. I fear I am going to wake at 3:44 am tonight...I might fear the clock after reading this short. The story flows well and is a great quick read."
