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Interesting
"Nice topic but very short "
Bla-bla
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Needs a lot of work
"Writing is poor. Grammar and spelling errors throughout. Looks like a rough draft/outline but lacking detail/emotion or story development. Could be a great story with a lot more detail, more skilled writing and more story development. "
