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El Pasado - Some Art Should Remain Undisturbed

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Summary

In El Pasado: Some Art Should Remain Undisturbed, the quiet town of Angono, known for its rich cultural heritage, harbors a hidden secret—an ancient gallery filled with art from the early Spanish colonial period. Diego, a young artist, stumbles upon this forgotten gallery and becomes captivated by a haunting portrait of a woman who bears an uncanny resemblance to a girl he met on a bus. Ignoring the warnings of an old woman who guards the gallery, Diego is drawn into a mystical journey that pulls him into El Pasado, a portal to the past where time distorts and reality bends. Diego's obsession with the portrait leads him into the heart of El Pasado, where he discovers that the woman in the painting, Ana, is bound by an ancient curse. As Diego becomes more entangled with the past, his actions begin to blur the lines between time, creating a dangerous imbalance. Claire, Diego’s longtime friend, secretly harboring feelings for him, embarks on her own quest to save him from El Pasado. Unbeknownst to Diego, Claire has a deep connection to the curse and possesses abilities that make her integral to restoring balance to the timeline.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Prologue

In the quiet, forgotten corners of Angono, the air was thick with history. Ancient stones whispered secrets of long-lost tales, and the shadows seemed to move with a life of their own, carrying the weight of time. Among the town’s narrow streets and hidden alleys, there existed a place few dared to speak of, let alone enter.

The gallery was buried in the heart of this silence, a sanctuary of art left undisturbed for centuries. Its walls were adorned with relics of a bygone era—portraits, landscapes, and sculptures from the early Spanish colonial period. The eyes of the figures in the paintings seemed to follow those who entered, their gaze unrelenting, as if guarding their secrets from the prying eyes of the present.

But the gallery’s true treasure lay deeper, in a room that no one knew existed, save for one. It was a portrait unlike any other—hauntingly beautiful, almost alive, its subject a woman whose eyes held the weight of centuries. And beneath her gaze, a curse lingered—El Pasado, the past that should remain undisturbed.

It was said that the portrait was a window, not just to the past, but to another time, another world—one where time folded in on itself, and the boundaries between the present and what had already been were no longer clear. Those who looked too closely would find themselves pulled into the depths of El Pasado, never to return the same.

In the shadows of the gallery stood the Keeper, an old woman whose eyes had seen too much of the world. She was the guardian of the balance, a protector of the thin veil between past and present. She had watched over the gallery for years, waiting, always waiting.

One evening, as the sun dipped below the horizon, the Keeper felt it—the stirring of time. Someone had entered the gallery. Someone had found the portrait.

And now, time itself was shifting.

“Some things should never be awakened,” the Keeper whispered to herself, her voice a fragile wisp in the empty gallery. Her gnarled fingers traced the edges of a Tarot card—a symbol of fate, of choices yet to be made.

She had seen this coming for years—the prophecy that foretold of a young man and woman whose fates would intertwine with the cursed portrait. They would be drawn into El Pasado, into the heart of time’s most dangerous secret, where the past was a living, breathing entity that could change the future with the slightest touch.

The old woman knew the dangers of meddling with time. She had witnessed it before—people lost, lives shattered, histories rewritten. The past was not something to be altered; it was something to be respected, feared even. But now the cycle was beginning again. Someone was about to disturb the balance.

With a deep breath, the Keeper reached for her Tarot cards and drew one—the Hanged Man.

Change was coming.

And this time, the stakes were higher than ever before.

In the stillness of the gallery, the past began to stir.

And with it, the destiny of two souls who were about to embark on a journey beyond time—a journey that would test their courage, their love, and the very fabric of reality itself.

The Keeper’s warning had been clear: Some art should remain undisturbed. But the portrait’s gaze was too alluring, its pull too strong. For once the past awakens, it will not go quietly.

And neither will those who dare to challenge it.



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