Inkitt
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A beautiful mistake

"I have enjoyed reading this story. I can see why you were slightly dissatisfied with the complicated plot line, but am glad you decided to finish the story with an upbeat ending. Thank you."

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A beutifull mistake

"It was good it could of been better if you took a little more time with the other characters "

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